Sunday, February 15, 2009

Verses

damnit. Stupid verses. Why must they be so... necessary.

I have the 2nd part of each line, but can't seem to decide on what I want for the first part. The song is gutwrenching, though. The kind of song I'm afraid to let people listen to, it's so brutally personal.

2 comments:

  1. Have you tried just using what you've got? Few things are more powerful than silence.

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  2. Great work thus far good sir. Finally had a chance to listen to the rest of the tracks posted thus far on my space, really diggin on OT&B, in my complete musical illiteracy I feel it's got a "happy" sounding ending. Congrats w/ getting Ballad of You & I on the RPM blog, stick with it/ more than halfway done!!!

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