i like it but it doesn't quite feel like it's "yours". for lack of a nicer term, it sounds kinda generic. i love the lyrics, and i know it's just a demo, but it lacks your unique influence i think.
It is different from what we're used to hearing from you...it's almost...happy, but just almost. I really love the cadence of the guitar riff, it cuts across the chorus nicely. Lyrically it's strong. This'll probably sound strange, but this track seems like it would be very much at home resting as ghost track at the end of an album...a little nugget of zen following the silence of what you think was the end.
I've conquered the RPM Challenge, a call to all unsigned musicians to write and record a full album in the month of February.
now's the hard part: Keeping the train rolling.
i like it but it doesn't quite feel like it's "yours". for lack of a nicer term, it sounds kinda generic. i love the lyrics, and i know it's just a demo, but it lacks your unique influence i think.
ReplyDeleteIt is different from what we're used to hearing from you...it's almost...happy, but just almost.
ReplyDeleteI really love the cadence of the guitar riff, it cuts across the chorus nicely. Lyrically it's strong. This'll probably sound strange, but this track seems like it would be very much at home resting as ghost track at the end of an album...a little nugget of zen following the silence of what you think was the end.